Concept and styling is a great idea. However, the backdrop could have been ironed and the model could have looked a bit happier, she really looks very sad, where's the beauty? This is a time to be happy and filled with love. In the event that you wanted a softer feel, I would suggest a warmer mood, maybe removing the brightness and also asking your model not to look directly at the camera but maybe rather at was she 's holding. She could lift the dried flowers closer to her face. How about adding some colourful flowers in amongst the dry one's for some contrast? I will be honest, I graded as I do feel this picture has potential, with some further careful planning and structuring this could turn out to be a winner. Good luck.
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